- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Narthax
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 15:01, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Narthax is a friend, yeah, I know he's been a good friend of mine. But lately something's changed that ain't hard to define. Narthax entered a room, wampas tore him up just fine.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- 501st dogma(talk) 16:56, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Cumulonimbus Cloud (Meeting Room) 19:45, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
Cavalier One
(Squadron channel)- —Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 20:18, June 18, 2012 (UTC) - IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:02, June 29, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Big L
Is Narthax his actual name? If not it needs a Conjecture tag.- Right, if he's a clone then that indeed would require a Nickname tag.
- Butting in here - I don't think the nickname tag is necessary at all. Narthax's situation is a little convoluted (Ukio homeworld) so we don't know that Narthax is a nickname. It is speculation - while we presume that he has a Stormtrooper ID number, since we have no idea on the specifics of his cloning then you cannot say for sure that Narthax is a nickname. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 13:44, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
- Reverted. Hanzo Hasashi 13:51, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
- Butting in here - I don't think the nickname tag is necessary at all. Narthax's situation is a little convoluted (Ukio homeworld) so we don't know that Narthax is a nickname. It is speculation - while we presume that he has a Stormtrooper ID number, since we have no idea on the specifics of his cloning then you cannot say for sure that Narthax is a nickname. - Cavalier One
- Right, if he's a clone then that indeed would require a Nickname tag.
Any quotes?- No. Hanzo Hasashi 13:31, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
- Good work. Cumulonimbus Cloud (Meeting Room) 02:38, June 11, 2012 (UTC)
551st
One thing. In both the intro and body you used the word "served" twice in a row. The intro contains them from sentences 1 + 2, while the body has them in 2 + 3. Change them so there is not two uses of the word right after one another.- Done. Hanzo Hasashi 16:26, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Good work. Nice to see you carrying my objections from Bursk over here and completing them also. 501st dogma(talk) 20:54, June 15, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
By 3 ABY, Narthax was a veteran of the garrison, and had tested on various frigid worlds. What do you mean by "tested on various frigid worlds?"- That's all the source itself says, he had "tested on various frigid worlds."
- Eh, fair enough.
- That's all the source itself says, he had "tested on various frigid worlds."
He commanded a squad during the battle, and trained snowtroopers in extreme-weather survival tactics. - he trained Stormtroopers during the battle?- Removed, and just relocated to P & T.
By that time, Narthax was one of the most well-trained and seasoned troops belonging to the Imperial Supreme Commander, the Dark Lord of the Sith Darth Vader. - Narthax was Vader's personal property? Because this sentence makes it sound like he is.- No, reworded.
No mention of his cold-weather survival training in the PT?- Added.
You mention he is armed with a blaster, but no mention of snowtrooper armor?- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:45, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
- Took care of that too. Hanzo Hasashi 14:54, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:07, June 29, 2012 (UTC)
- For WP:AMB. Hanzo Hasashi 15:01, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Again, thanks to LelalMekha. Hanzo Hasashi 15:01, June 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Will be away from the 30th to the 12th. I might still occasionally pop back on to check for objections, if not then I'll get to them afterwards. Hanzo Hasashi 03:54, June 26, 2012 (UTC)