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Naraka

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 20:31, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 09:00, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 475 words (51 introduction, 356 body, 68 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 295 words (55 introduction, 210 body, 30 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Rebels WP:AST

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Support

  1. ACvote Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 11:35, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 00:44, 14 October 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:46, 31 October 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 08:44, 5 November 2024 (UTC)

Object

Zed
  • Apologies for sending it over the limit :P A couple extra things: The Imperial prison should be mentioned in a Locations section rather than in Description.
    • No worries, you were right to suggest I expand it. Wok142 (talk) 05:53, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Atmosphere info in the infobox and Description can use the Type I note/wording such as here.
  • Since it's established the Empire built the prison, the History can start with a statement something along the lines of that it was constructed during the Imperial Era.
  • Also regarding the History section, I think Ohnaka and Terba being imprisoned should be mentioned before the rescue mission, since it chronologically happened earlier.
  • Are there any quotes that could be added? Even if there's not much directly relating to Naraka itself, I assume there would be at least something that'd work for History and Locations. Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 22:51, 5 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Addressed all. Realized while doing quotes that I should probably include the fact that the Imps talked about Naraka following the mission so I've added that in as well. Wok142 (talk) 05:53, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
      • Is there another quote about the Naraka prison that could be used in the Locations section? Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 11:26, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
        • Tossed one in of Hondo mentioning the prison. Wok142 (talk) 17:42, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
  • The last part about the escape could have a couple small details added; I'm recalling the scene with Ezra and the walker, which I think is worth a brief mention, and could clarify that they escaped the planet in the Ghost.
  • Unless the "made escape difficult" in Locations is something stated in the episode itself, it should probably be sourced to the Databank. Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 11:26, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed these details. Wok142 (talk) 17:42, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • Seems to be room for an image in history (though whether from-episode or just a relevant subject would be up to you). I also think it'd look much cleaner in default view to split that section in two paragraphs with the second starting as "Freeing both individuals,…"—spookywillowwtalk 01:34, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
    • With the new sectioning and expanding, I've made room for two images. I also broke up the paragraphs, although let me know if you think splitting in a different spot would be better since the article has changed shape a fair amount. Wok142 (talk) 05:53, 6 October 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • Leaving a note about adding similar as on your 44 scoop nom about it being in the trailer and then id'ed in the episode, there's also this preview clip to list as well, and the rebels recon to be listed as well (matching precedent from other pages) Lewisr (talk) 22:29, 8 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Added, thanks. Wok142 (talk) 02:52, 9 October 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 08:44, 5 November 2024 (UTC)