Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nantex-class territorial defense starfighter/Legends

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Geonosian starfighter

(+5)

Support

1. As nominator--Goodwood ^{(For the Rebellion!)} 23:04, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
2. Master Aban Fiolli ^{(Alpheridies University ComNet)} 01:15, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
3. Greyman^(Paratus) 14:55, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
4. Jedimca0^{(Do or Do Not, There is No Try)} 19:31, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
5. -- AdmirableAckbar ^[Talk] 23:13, 18 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

Comments

• Some thoughts from around the Family-sized Pasta Bowl of Fiolli:
  • The first sentence of the history section seems a bit run-on. Could it be separated into at least two sentences?
    • Fixed.Goodwood ^{(For the Rebellion!)} 01:10, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
  • I was a bit confused with the "though" and "however" associated with the first clause of the second paragraph under History. This sentence is also lengthy. Perhaps separating it a bit might clear it up?
    • Fixed.Goodwood ^{(For the Rebellion!)} 01:10, 12 October 2007 (UTC)
  • It is a good article, just those two little things that I noticed and made me do a double-take.
  • Master Aban Fiolli ^{(Alpheridies University ComNet)} 00:43, 12 October 2007 (UTC)