- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Nal Kenuun
- Nominated by: ToRsO bOy 01:48, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Nal Kenuun is a nasty Muun.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
Watch your verb tense, please, though. CC7567 (talk) 21:10, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:25, May 2, 2010 (UTC)- SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 06:14, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- Jonjedigrandmaster
(We seed the stars) 18:08, May 6, 2010 (UTC) - Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:50, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
Object
- The Grand Master
"Kenuun was taller and slimmer compared to most Muuns" Any reason this is in the bio and not the P&T?- I didn't know appearances were to be relegated to P&T. Added. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- Since it's about his physical appearance, which is considered a trait, it's generally more appropriate to put such things in the P&T. Jonjedigrandmaster (We seed the stars) 18:08, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- Since it's about his physical appearance, which is considered a trait, it's generally more appropriate to put such things in the P&T. Jonjedigrandmaster
- I didn't know appearances were to be relegated to P&T. Added. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
Could Grunta's death be mentioned sooner in the bio? Right now it seems like an afterthought.- Added. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
I would also suggest mentioning in the P&T that Kenuun saw beings such as Grunta as his own property.- Added. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- That's all. Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster (We seed the stars) 23:40, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- Soresu
never failing to demand a replacement or a suitable payment be made in the instances in which his properties were destroyed. This seems to be contradicted by the destruction of Grunta's podracer.- There's a line near the end of the bio about Kenuun collecting the bounties on Solo and X-7 to replace the crashed podracer. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- And that's why I don't review FANs: I start missing stuff I wouldn't otherwise. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 06:14, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- There's a line near the end of the bio about Kenuun collecting the bounties on Solo and X-7 to replace the crashed podracer. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- Nice. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 04:26, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
- Much appreciated. ToRsO bOy 05:42, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:21, May 7, 2010 (UTC)