Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nacronis

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Nacronis

  • Nominated by: Zed42 (talk) 20:47, August 16, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Great work! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:57, August 20, 2019 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:38, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 21:44, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  4. Nice work --Lewisr (talk) 22:15, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  5. User:Spookywilloww/Sig2 22:41, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • I think you should mention Nacronis ground control somewhere in the article.
    • I was hesitant to mention it since it was only mentioned in a falsified sequence of events, but I managed to work it in. Zed42 (talk) 02:05, August 20, 2019 (UTC)
      • Good. I think you can also add that quote about the ground control if you'll keep that in the Inhabitants sections. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:15, August 20, 2019 (UTC)
        • I'm not sure whether that quote can actually be used. Since it only appeared in Quell's false report of the events, it may not be something she even said. Zed42 (talk) 03:31, August 20, 2019 (UTC)
          • I thought you could work that out in the quote's caption, but I'm leaving it up to you. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:19, August 20, 2019 (UTC)
            • Included it, but I'm not entirely sure about the caption. Zed42 (talk) 21:42, August 20, 2019 (UTC)
  • I believe there is room for at least one image in the article, in the History section in particular. As there are no images of the planet, I think you could use the image of something indirectly related to Nacronis, such as the 204th Imperial Fighter Wing, a Messenger droid, or one of the characters mentioned in the article, along with a caption about that subject's connection to the planet. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:09, August 20, 2019 (UTC)
    • Added an image of Quell. Zed42 (talk) 02:05, August 20, 2019 (UTC)
  • Given the context and its unique spelling, I believe siltstorm probably deserves its own article.
    • Created. Zed42 (talk) 21:42, August 20, 2019 (UTC)
  • I think you can slightly expand the intro with the mentions of siltstorms and what type those "several inhabited settlements" were. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:19, August 20, 2019 (UTC)
    • Done. Zed42 (talk) 21:42, August 20, 2019 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • I'm not seeing any significance to the additional detail that Shakara Nuress was chosen to participate in Nacronis' destruction "by one of the Emperor's Messenger droids." It seems like the sentence can just omit that part and not lose any meaning to the planet itself.
    • Removed. Zed42 (talk) 00:20, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  • The Inhabitants section states that there were other inhabitants besides humans, which I feel should be represented in the infobox somehow. I don't know if you want to infer that to explicitly mean there were alien species, in which case you could just say "Other nonhumans." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:01, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
    • The book doesn't explicitly say whether the entire population was humans, just that there were humans on the planet. I've reworded that section to avoid any mention of nonhuman species. Zed42 (talk) 00:20, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:23, August 23, 2019 (UTC)