Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mustafar fire diamond

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Mustafar fire diamond

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 01:11, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Tie-in expansion with Unidentified individual (Qui-Gon Jinn)
• Date Archived: 22:32, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 371 words (79 introduction, 277 body, 15 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

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Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 05:08, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 22:52, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 23:39, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:30, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead

• Based on the quote I think you can go into slightly more detail on the diamond's worth, since it seems to say that the cost of the diamond would cover the costs of the work the thieves did on Pijal and three more years of that work rather than just sustaining them in general for just three years. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:34, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Tweaked to include the value reflecting the work they'd done there; the quote does indicate 'remained here for another...' though, which if they had remained there they wouldn't be paying the fuel costs of toting the gems across the galaxy and such, so avoided directly saying it'd also cover the cost of the work for that time.—spookywilloww^talk 13:21, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:30, 24 October 2023 (UTC)