Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mushbloom

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Mushbloom

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 13:36, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Previous CAN
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:58, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
2. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:27, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 20:04, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:49, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
5. MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 04:50, 22 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• There's enough room in the History section for an image of a related subject, such as Kashyyk or someone like Cal or the cheff or someone else.Fan26 (Talk) 17:47, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 18:02, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
• The intro needs to clarify Tuggs used the mushblooms to make that mushbloom pie Fan26 (Talk) 03:25, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:22, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
    • Gracias Fan26 (Talk) 16:33, 7 September 2022 (UTC)

Spooky

• Though it was a rare occurrence, could poisoning be considered an effect for the infobox? Even if it's only to be marked as (in rare cases), seems to fit the category.—spookywilloww^talk 18:16, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Added poisoning to infobox. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:32, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
• In the image caption, is Mushbloom being capitalized intentional? Whichever way it's intended, the article body and the caption should be consistent.
• Is it worth mentioning the color of the fruiting body in it's mature state? (green, seems like)
• Would you be opposed to swapping the second and third sentences in the intro? Reasoning being that the History introduces the Fallen Order stuff first, then the mushbloom pie stuff after, which the intro has the other way around. Though we don't know the exact date on the Tuggs' stuff it would be nice for consistency anyway, unless the body is the one to be swapped.—spookywilloww^talk 02:22, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:44, 12 November 2022 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• You need to establish that Ghosts of Vader's Castle takes place after Shadows of Vader's Castle in the date note. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:45, 14 December 2022 (UTC)
  • I'm slightly confused. Do you want me to edit the template that dates the comic, or rewrite the date note? AmazinglyCool (talk) 01:25, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
    • The reference says " Star Wars Adventures: Shadow of Vader's Castle takes place after the Battle of Endor, however Star Wars Adventures: Ghosts of Vader's Castle 2 establishes that the Galactic Empire still exists" but doesn't establish at all what the relevance of Star Wars Adventures: Ghosts of Vader's Castle 2 is to the events of Star Wars Adventures: Shadow of Vader's Castle. I'm assuming that Star Wars Adventures: Shadow of Vader's Castle takes place before Star Wars Adventures: Ghosts of Vader's Castle? Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:14, 18 December 2022 (UTC)
      • It does, I've fixed the reference accordingly. AmazinglyCool (talk) 00:07, 19 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:50, 22 December 2022 (UTC)

• I'm currently working on the redlink. AmazinglyCool (talk) 13:45, 18 August 2022 (UTC)