- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Mubasa hock
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:32, January 4, 2015 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: CA that got too long.
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
- 501st dogma(talk) 15:26, January 12, 2015 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:46, January 13, 2015 (UTC)- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 15:27, January 14, 2015 (UTC) 
Supreme Emperor (talk) 06:25, January 17, 2015 (UTC)- IFYLOFD (Talk) 06:13, January 18, 2015 (UTC)
Object
501st dogma
Is mubasa hok supposed to be italicized? The intro has it as such, but the description refrains from doing this.- As it's an alien language I normally italicise it. Both italicised. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:12, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
"Found on" section in infobox probably should have Tatooine after Mos Eisley.501st dogma(talk) 02:17, January 8, 2015 (UTC)- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:12, January 8, 2015 (UTC)
Toprawa
- Reviewing notes: 1) Mubasa hock and montra fruit are not capitalized in the sources, yet this article presumes to capitalize even when not at the beginning of a sentence. This is the kind of fine detail to which you need to be paying attention in order to improve both your article writing and reviewing. 2) I've added a bit of context for who Ben Burtt is, as this is a significant detail to understanding the significance of the text. As this is not self-sourcing, I have referenced the BTS.
- 1) Thanks for fixing, I'll take note of this in future. 2) I didn't think it necessary but certainly have no objection to it being there. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:11, January 13, 2015 (UTC)
There is an entire paragraph worth of detail in the Phrase Book missing from this article, including mentioning that Hutt cuisine (which includes mubasa hock) is casual, how Hutts eat it, and that it is expensive. I've added a quote to the top of the article from this section.- In the same way that our character articles usually don't mention general species traits I'd assumed that food articles didn't need to mention general cuisine traits. I've added the detail now, but this means a fair number of other articles should technically include this information, and not just the other food articles from the Phrase book. I'l update all of them soon. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:11, January 13, 2015 (UTC)
- I had debated with myself a bit whether to make this an objection, but I was convinced to do so since the text refers specifically to this dish (along with the others mentioned), not just the cuisine in general. As for other articles, that's the factor I would recommend using to determine whether to add any more information: whether or not something is specifically referenced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:46, January 13, 2015 (UTC)
- In the same way that our character articles usually don't mention general species traits I'd assumed that food articles didn't need to mention general cuisine traits. I've added the detail now, but this means a fair number of other articles should technically include this information, and not just the other food articles from the Phrase book. I'l update all of them soon. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:11, January 13, 2015 (UTC)
If you're going to choose to cite pages by number, then you should do so throughout to stay uniform. I've added a new reference to source the date of Red Harvest and for Rebel Force: Renegade in the BTS. Please locate the page numbers and/or chapters for these and add them in. A new page number will also need to be used for the preceding objection.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:39, January 12, 2015 (UTC)- I've removed pages numbers and chapters entirely as due to the new information added both the Phrase book and Red Harvest need sourcing to multiple pages and so a single non-paged reference makes the page simpler. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:11, January 13, 2015 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:13, January 18, 2015 (UTC)