Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Monthan

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Monthan

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:13, December 23, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Subnom of Trios

(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 01:07, January 3, 2016 (UTC)
  2. 501st dogma(talk) 19:49, January 13, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Cwedin(talk) 20:26, January 14, 2016 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:43, January 14, 2016 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 18:25, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 20:38, January 27, 2016 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 20:43, January 27, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Clones
  • Don't forget to source the Behind the Scenes, even if it is minor.
    • I'm still reasonably certain this isn't required if the section is self sourcing, but done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:37, January 2, 2016 (UTC)
      • I may be wrong, but I remember being advised to do it myself, so I'm kind of going off of that. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 01:07, January 3, 2016 (UTC)
  • When a word in a comic book is bolded for emphasis, instead of bolding it in the article, what usually happens here is that the word it is put into italics. So instead of "You did hit their hearts" it should look like "You did hit their hearts." --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 01:31, January 2, 2016 (UTC)
Cav
  • Should "King of Shu-torun" be added to the infobox's affiliation field?
    • Since he's family I don't really think so. If I was going to put anything there it would be some kind of royal family article, but that seems pretty unnecessary. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:03, January 13, 2016 (UTC)
  • I assume the King rebelled by deliberating failing to meet Imperial ore quotas? If so, that should be stated directly. - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 01:22, January 9, 2016 (UTC)
    • It isn't really made clear in the comic. Vader complains that they aren't meeting their quotas, and Trios later says that the Empire's quotas are crippling, but it's never stated if the quotas aren't being met because of rebellion or just because their to high. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:03, January 13, 2016 (UTC)
501st
  • Since Mission to Shu-torun is conjecture, you shouldn't link it by name in the infobox. Use "During an Imperial mission to Shu-Torun" or the like instead. 501st dogma(talk) 23:14, January 9, 2016 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • As a reviewing note, please take some time to look at some of my changes in my copy-edit, especially regarding the overall lack of linking, capitalization of ranks and titles, and fixing British spelling (defense, not defence).
    • I've looked through the changes. Thanks. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:38, January 14, 2016 (UTC)
  • You should probably subsection the Bio in the middle and add another quote (if available) and image. The current image should go into the second subsection and ideally another one could go into the first. It won't look good in Monobook, but there should be enough room to hold everything in Oasis. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:10, January 14, 2016 (UTC)
    • Done. How's it look? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:38, January 14, 2016 (UTC)
      • The Hollian image caption is completely irrelevant to this article. Is that image showing Monthan and his two sisters? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:47, January 14, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:45, January 27, 2016 (UTC)