Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mission to Fest

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Mission to Fest

• Nominated by: --Eyrezer 22:52, 2 February 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Republic Commando goodness?

(2 ACs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 11:25, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
2. Muuuuuurgh 21:11, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
3. NaruHina ^Talk 05:53, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
4. Ugh, KT fanfiction. Graestan^(Talk) 22:21, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
5. Thefourdotelipsis 23:09, 12 February 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. • despite having just issued them stealth Katarn-class commando armor; despite being extra tough. Get rid of double word usage.
     • Done
   • Where was Niner during the actual assualt? ? SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 04:53, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
     • We do not know. Whatever he does is not mentioned in Fi's journal
2. NaruHina
   • Aftermath section?
     • Added, although you made me add referencing :p
   • The intro could be expanded.
     • I added a fraction more, but I don't really know how to expand it much more to be honest.
       • I added what I personally think is sufficient, make changes as you like. NaruHina ^Talk 05:53, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
         • That will also work! --Eyrezer 08:10, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
   • That picture is of Delta Squad. I recognize Boss and Sev especially.
     • Well that's a bummer. Removed
   • "The clones continued with their mission..." OK and? How did they contine? How did they make their way up the tower? How was the plant destroyed?
     • There is no info on this. The mission is only mentioned in a short prologue to the novel, and only described in a very fragmentary fashion.
   • Have nice day. NaruHina ^Talk 07:04, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:24, 13 February 2009 (UTC)