Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mika's tent

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Mika's tent

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 02:39, 29 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 17:46, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 626 words (89 introduction, 476 body, 61 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:RESISTANCE

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Support

  1. ACvote Nice one! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:31, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote copy-edit/Objections handled via Discord.—spookywillowwtalk 02:18, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:13, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 17:45, 26 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • "After he arrived, Grey took a boot of credits the mechanic had brought with him as payment…" Maybe it's just me, but when I first read this, I was confused about who the mechanic is, as if someone else left the boot in the tent and Mika picked it up after Kaz walked in. Could you reword that a bit?
  • IIRC, the episode doesn't definitely say if the "curse" was real or not. I think "he was cursed by the pirate Leoz" sounds like it was real for sure. Also the Bucket's List Extra has this: "One version of the story had the curse indeed be real, but Mika found it easier to remove if she let Kaz believe it was fake!"
  • Do you think Category:Businesses would be appropriate here since Mika offered fortune telling to her customers for a fee? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:02, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Fixed all, thanks for spotting those. I just put that he was supposedly cursed, if that works? Lewisr (talk) 16:24, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
Fan
  • " Xiono and Vozo made their way to Mika's stall on the suggestion of the latter to talk about the curse that had supposedly been placed on him. " I feel like there's a better way to word this-it sounds as if Neeku was the ne who was cursed almost? Fan26 (Talk) 18:41, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
    • How does that sound now? Lewisr (talk) 19:00, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:45, 26 August 2023 (UTC)