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Memory log
- Nominated by: Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:55, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
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- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:25, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:19, 22 March 2022 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 02:43, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
- 1358 (Talk) 18:53, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
- OOM 224 21:15, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
Object
Braha'log
I think it's worth briefly mentioning General Grievous's importance to the narrative in the intro.- Good? Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:34, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
C-9969 landing craft is a Legends article.- Ah, fixed! Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:34, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
On the topic of the landing craft, I think that should be included during the initial mention of the crash.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:25, 15 February 2022 (UTC)- Addressed Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:34, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
OOM
The correct order for file links is [[File_name|thumb|location|size|caption]]- Addressed Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:09, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
I don't see a need to mention the Separatist Droid Army- Precedent is on Balance stabilizer Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:08, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
- Should've clarified that I was referring to the History section. The first sentence is too long, so you can spare mentioning the Droid Army there. OOM 224 18:12, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
- Shortened in a different manner, thoughts? Editoronthewiki (talk) 03:04, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
- Should've clarified that I was referring to the History section. The first sentence is too long, so you can spare mentioning the Droid Army there. OOM 224 18:12, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
- Precedent is on Balance stabilizer Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:08, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
Frankly, it doesn't help readers to pull out the full title "Supreme Martial Commander of the Separatist Droid Armies"OOM 224 23:03, 4 March 2022 (UTC)- shortened Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:06, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
A quote from the episode, probably the line just before the intro quote, can definitely be added to the History section.1358 (Talk) 16:27, 13 April 2022 (UTC)- Done Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:13, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
- I feel like the earlier bit of dialogue, regarding them performing the robolobotomy itself to access the memory log, would be a better fit. 1358 (Talk) 15:21, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
- I actually realized that can go in the description, given the fact that you can get memory logs via a robolobotomy should probably get mentioned there. Thoughts? Editoronthewiki (talk) 17:50, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
- I feel like the earlier bit of dialogue, regarding them performing the robolobotomy itself to access the memory log, would be a better fit. 1358 (Talk) 15:21, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
- Done Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:13, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
Comments
- How do we know this isn't the same as a memory bank? Mr Star Wars AminoRepublic (talk) 23:08, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
- We don't, it would be speculating to assume its the same. I would assume the memory "logs" are what are stored in a memory "bank" but no source has established that yet Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:09, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
- Since B1-series battle droids are also used in the Confederacy of Independent Systems Navy coupled with the current wording, would it be appropriate to say that memory logs were used by the Confederacy military as a whole instead of just the Separatist Droid Army? Erebus Chronus (Talk) 05:06, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
- Ah, great point! Fixed Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:32, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:15, 24 April 2022 (UTC)