Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Meetra Surik's Jedi Master

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Meetra Surik's Jedi Master

• Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 04:30, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Surik's Jedi Master is quite elusive, don't you agree?

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. —MJ— ^{Training Room} Thursday, August 2, 2012, 16:54 UTC
2. Good work.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:36, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
3. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:05, August 16, 2012 (UTC)
4. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 04:04, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
5. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:52, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Cav

• The ending of the bio states that Surik left to fight in the Mandalorian Wars. Currently, how its phrased leads me to think that he reason for leaving was a direct result of the argument she had. Can you just make it clear that they had no relation to each other (that we know of), or be clearer if the events are connected?
  • Taken care of.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 22:56, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
• The reference mentions a droid with a recording; I'm wondering if this should be mentioned in the article at all, along with Surik discovering the recording? Thoughts? - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:22, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
  • Are you suggesting putting it in a subsection? I think it'd be a good idea. Or are you suggesting me removing it, because that's the only way the Padawan is mentioned.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 22:55, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
    • Ah, a little misworded by me there; I definitely meant that the info should be in the article proper as you've done, not removed entirely. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:05, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Return of the Jedi

• The game mechanics template would fit well in the Legacy section since repairing the droid is optional, correct?—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:46, August 7, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 22:54, August 7, 2012 (UTC)

Grunny

• I'd suggest not using "he" here if the sex of the character isn't known: "where he was capable of training Surik" grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 03:13, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thought I got all those, thanks, Grunny!—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 03:37, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• Please mention in the body of the article that Surik went against the Jedi Council by taking part in the war.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:21, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 04:51, August 19, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:53, August 22, 2012 (UTC)

• Many thanks to Master Jonathan for the pre-nom copy-edit & review.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:28, August 2, 2012 (UTC)