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Mazicia Organa
- Nominated by: LelalMekha (talk) 11:48, January 28, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Huge thanks to Master Jonathan for his very thorough review! I must admit my initial draft was quite messy. I probably need some sleep.
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- —MJ— Comlink 17:01, January 28, 2013 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 00:14, January 31, 2013 (UTC) 
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:27, February 19, 2013 (UTC)- Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 13:33, February 21, 2013 (UTC) - JangFett (Talk) 05:20, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
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Exiled Jedi
I think that you should mention that her brother was murdered in the intro.- Done. --LelalMekha (talk) 11:37, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
Context on Antar 4.- Added. --LelalMekha (talk) 11:37, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
"Later in life, Mazicia joined the House of Organa, one of the galaxy's most respected Ancient Houses" You have this sourced to Children of the Jedi, but the article does not say that she was mentioned in it.- See new ref 8. --LelalMekha (talk) 11:37, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
I would mention that Breha Antilles was married to Bail Organa in the Biography.- Added. --LelalMekha (talk) 11:37, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
Could you try to combine some of the short paragraphs in the biography section?- I combined the last two paragraphs. --LelalMekha (talk) 11:37, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
I not real sure what the sources say, but some things in the biography seem rather point-of-view such as: "the pristine Alderaan, a planet of refined culture" and "became dedicated and loving parents"- I had actually forgotten to source the "pristine an culture part", but it's lifted from The Illustrated Star Wars Universe. As regards the "loving parents", Wild Space has this sentence: "As the scion of an ancient, noble House, privilege had been his from the moment he drew breath. And though he'd never been spoiled, he wasn't so self-deluded he couldn't recognize his advantages. Magnificent home. Doting parents." --LelalMekha (talk) 11:37, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
- I added a redlink for the criminal organization, but by the GAN rules you are not required to create an article for it.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:44, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
- I may still take care of it later today. --LelalMekha (talk) 11:37, January 29, 2013 (UTC)
Context on the Clone Wars in the intro and biography.- Done. --LelalMekha (talk) 00:08, January 31, 2013 (UTC)
In the intro you call the corvette a CR90, but in the bio you call it a CR70.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:59, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
- Did I? Obviously, I did. Must be because of the Sundered Heart, I guess. Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 00:08, January 31, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:20, February 22, 2013 (UTC)