Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Maris Brood's Master

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Maris Brood's Master

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 14:25, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: More TFU goodness.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:25, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Assuming Cal's objections will be fixed. Corellian PremierRobotechAll along the watchtower 03:16, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:59, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
  4. --Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 00:03, October 19, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote --Eyrezer 23:40, October 28, 2011 (UTC)
  6. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 19:38, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Cal Jedi
  • The databank ref and the Appearances section need to be formatted in the same way.
  • Although you make mention of the Galactic Republic in the main body, it doesn't necessarily say that he was affiliated with it like is said in the infobox. That'll have to be made mention of in the body.
  • Besides that, another nice article, Jinn.--Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 18:16, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
    • Both fixed. Thanks for the review. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 13:47, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • I'm assuming this is not applicable, but just to check: can any potential military service in the Grand Army of the Republic (as a Jedi General or as some sort of Jedi officer, perhaps?) be attributed to the Master? Or does the source just say that he and Brood were "stationed" in the Outer Rim? Even if the latter is the case, maybe you could get a little more context in about the Clone Wars, that the Republic was fighting the Separatists; it would be good context to have in any case, as the article is currently unclear about how the Clone Wars, clone troopers, and Republic are related.
    • Yes, the source only says that they were stationed there. Added a bit about the Clone Wars, though.
  • Can you get in the 19 BBY date at least for Order 66, if not also for the "closing stages" of the Clone Wars? CC7567 (talk) 04:35, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:38, October 29, 2011 (UTC)