Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Maoi Madakor

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Contents

  • 1 Maoi Madakor
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Anil
        • 1.1.2.2 Toprawa
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Maoi Madakor

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:33, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Not sure why she had to hide her Irish accent

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:28, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:01, October 2, 2019 (UTC)
  3. Lewisr (talk) 01:51, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
  4. User:Spookywilloww/Sig2 02:03, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 18:23, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • Could you please reword the first sentence of the second paragraph of the intro? The use of "so" twice looks a little weird to me.
    • How's it look now? Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:23, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
      • Much better. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:28, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Please use {{FFCite}} for referencing.
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:23, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • The SWCCG template italicize "Coruscant Limited;" however, you only put it in quotation marks in the article body. I'm not sure which one of them is correct, but they should be consistent. Please revise. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:51, September 12, 2019 (UTC)
    • Italicised to be consistent with other articles. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:23, September 13, 2019 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Article should detail skin color in infobox and P/T.
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:31, October 2, 2019 (UTC)
  • Tarkin cannot be used as a straight reference for this characters serving in the Judicial Forces if she is not mentioned in that story. You will need to apply a manual reference note.
    • Expanded as I did for Williams. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:31, October 2, 2019 (UTC)
  • Please correct formatting for Tarkin pipelink. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:20, October 2, 2019 (UTC)
    • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:31, October 2, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:23, October 5, 2019 (UTC)