Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Mamura's

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  • 1 Mamura's
    • 1.1 (4 ACs/0 Users/4 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support votes
      • 1.1.2 Objections
        • 1.1.2.1 Comet
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Mamura's

  • Nominated by: Stake black msg 06:56, 3 October 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 02:42, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 850 words (99 introduction, 407 body, 344 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 721 words (99 introduction, 373 body, 249 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:VISIONS, WP:NOVELS

(4 ACs/0 Users/4 Total)

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Support votes

  1. ACvote CometSmudge (talk) 18:19, 8 October 2025 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:30, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 00:41, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 01:58, 9 October 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Comet
  • Articles like "a" and "the" should not be placed in pipelinks, so this should be fixed in the infobox
  • The paragraph in the history section is long enough that it should be split into two
  • The BTS is four paragraphs long, so it should either be sectioned or two of the paragraphs should be merged
  • If Saikov is actually spelled like that on the sign, the typo should be noted in some way.
  • The current wording of it being "likely 最高" feels a bit speculative
  • I think Kyoto should get some context like the other words listed
  • The novel is missing from the appearances section
  • The Art of Star Wars: Visions includes an image of the poster, and the Filmmaker Focus also depicts Mamura's, so those need to be listed in sources. I also think you should go through the sources listed on the Visions article to make sure nothing else is missing.
  • Because there are multiple images of the article's subject, a medicat needs to be created
  • It feels speculative to assume that something we see one instance of is typical, so I think that sentence mentioning the meetings in the square in front should be moved to History with a mention of the Ronin observing it.
  • Category:Outer Rim Territories structures is applicable
  • Films typically don't have their directors listed, so the George Lucas mention isn't needed in the BTS. CometSmudge (talk) 22:53, 6 October 2025 (UTC)
    • Made some changes to align with the points above. I had a look at other sources but didn't find anything else. Stake black msg 00:01, 7 October 2025 (UTC)
      • The year actually should be kept for A New Hope
      • One paragraph sections are also avoided in most cases, and the Easter Eggs section is short enough that I think the two paragraphs can just be merged, leaving you with a three paragraph BTS that doesn't require sectioning (Especially since currently there's a one sentence paragraph). CometSmudge (talk) 20:03, 7 October 2025 (UTC)
        • Done. Stake black msg 21:00, 7 October 2025 (UTC)
  • The description of it being communal actually seems to be referring to a different storehouse in Osou CometSmudge (talk) 23:30, 7 October 2025 (UTC)
    • You're right. Removed it. Stake black msg 00:25, 8 October 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Agree. Possess you. That is what I say when people sneeze. 😉–Nightlily 16:24, 6 October 2025 (UTC) Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:58, 9 October 2025 (UTC)