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Mamura's
- Nominated by: Stake black msg 06:56, 3 October 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 02:42, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 850 words (99 introduction, 407 body, 344 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 721 words (99 introduction, 373 body, 249 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:VISIONS, WP:NOVELS
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Support votes
CometSmudge (talk) 18:19, 8 October 2025 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 00:30, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 00:41, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 01:58, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
Objections
Comet
Articles like "a" and "the" should not be placed in pipelinks, so this should be fixed in the infoboxThe paragraph in the history section is long enough that it should be split into twoThe BTS is four paragraphs long, so it should either be sectioned or two of the paragraphs should be mergedIf Saikov is actually spelled like that on the sign, the typo should be noted in some way.The current wording of it being "likely 最高" feels a bit speculativeI think Kyoto should get some context like the other words listedThe novel is missing from the appearances sectionThe Art of Star Wars: Visions includes an image of the poster, and the Filmmaker Focus also depicts Mamura's, so those need to be listed in sources. I also think you should go through the sources listed on the Visions article to make sure nothing else is missing.Because there are multiple images of the article's subject, a medicat needs to be createdIt feels speculative to assume that something we see one instance of is typical, so I think that sentence mentioning the meetings in the square in front should be moved to History with a mention of the Ronin observing it.Category:Outer Rim Territories structures is applicableFilms typically don't have their directors listed, so the George Lucas mention isn't needed in the BTS.CometSmudge (talk) 22:53, 6 October 2025 (UTC)- Made some changes to align with the points above. I had a look at other sources but didn't find anything else. Stake black msg 00:01, 7 October 2025 (UTC)
- The year actually should be kept for A New Hope
- One paragraph sections are also avoided in most cases, and the Easter Eggs section is short enough that I think the two paragraphs can just be merged, leaving you with a three paragraph BTS that doesn't require sectioning (Especially since currently there's a one sentence paragraph). CometSmudge (talk) 20:03, 7 October 2025 (UTC)
- Done. Stake black msg 21:00, 7 October 2025 (UTC)
- Made some changes to align with the points above. I had a look at other sources but didn't find anything else. Stake black msg 00:01, 7 October 2025 (UTC)
The description of it being communal actually seems to be referring to a different storehouse in OsouCometSmudge (talk) 23:30, 7 October 2025 (UTC)- You're right. Removed it. Stake black msg 00:25, 8 October 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Agree. Possess you. That is what I say when people sneeze. 😉–Nightlily 16:24, 6 October 2025 (UTC) Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 01:58, 9 October 2025 (UTC)