Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Malt

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Contents

  • 1 Malt
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Jujiggum
        • 1.1.2.2 Xd1358
        • 1.1.2.3 QGJ
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Malt

  • Nominated by: Darth Morrt 01:23, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I didn't find any more source.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Still not seeing a 1st appearance/mention, so this support is pending Xd's objection; but otherwise a very interesting and unconventional article. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 23:49, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 16:58, January 29, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Really interesting! Menkooroo 13:48, January 31, 2011 (UTC)
  4. A well written and comprehensive article. Nightlily 18:54, February 1, 2011 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 20:49, February 2, 2011 (UTC)
  6. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 19:26, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Jujiggum
  • The article is littered with grammatical errors left and right; please fix them, and I will give the article a thorough review. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 05:58, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
    • I hope I fixed all (and didn't make more). Darth Morrt 10:05, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
  • "In 0 BBY, while bringing back the past and imagining the future…" I hope you don't mean that they literally brought back the past. :P Please rephrase.
  • Per precedent, please use a food infobox.
    • Added- Darth Morrt 22:19, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
  • I just want to double-check on the matter: there are no applicable quotes? No one saying anything about Callista's hair color? No one ordering a malt from Memah?
    • There is no quote that mentions any malt. Darth Morrt 22:19, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
  • Perhaps a mention in the BTS of when "malt brown" was first mentioned as a color would be appropriate (I'm assuming Children of Twilight).
    • Done. Darth Morrt 22:19, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
      • Wow, glad you can read what I mean, and not what I type: definitely meant Children of the Jedi; sorry about that. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 23:49, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
  • Possibly more to come. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 16:40, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
Xd1358
  • Lacks a first mention/appearance template. 1358 (Talk) 06:33, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
    • Done. Darth Morrt 10:05, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
QGJ
  • There are two Star Wars cookbooks out there, which we apparently don't have articles for. One is even named Darth Malt and More Galactic Recipes. Have you checked those? Just Google "Star Wars cookbook."QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 10:18, January 24, 2011 (UTC)
    • Thanks. I didn't know these books exist. The search engine is malfunctioning. We have articles for the books. They come up when I was trying to make a redlink to create it. Added info to the BTS. Darth Morrt 15:20, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:27, February 3, 2011 (UTC)