Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Malakili

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Contents

  • 1 Malakili
    • 1.1 (1 ACs/3 Users/4 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 AV-6R7
        • 1.1.2.2 Ayrehead02
        • 1.1.2.3 Cav
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Malakili

  • Nominated by: Cwedin(talk) 05:11, March 8, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I've always felt sorry for the guy.

(1 ACs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:23, March 8, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Brules (talk) 06:49, March 8, 2016 (UTC)
  3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:36, April 18, 2016 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:11, June 30, 2016 (UTC)

Object

AV-6R7
  • The bit about his clothing belongs in the equipment section, not P&T. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:02, March 8, 2016 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Cwedin(talk) 06:07, March 8, 2016 (UTC)
Ayrehead02
  • Could you add just a little more detail to Luke and the rancor encounter? When Luke first tries to escape through the back door, you can see Malaki and Giran sitting at a table. They then get up and start shouting at Luke while he tries to get through. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:42, April 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • Done. Cwedin(talk) 23:20, April 4, 2016 (UTC)
Cav
  • Explanation of why the rancor would suffer injuries eating prisoners is needed.
    • Unfortunately, there isn't one. The source simply reads, "He tends any wounds the rancor receives while eating prisoners."
  • Is it not worth mentioning the Gamorrean who entered the pit with Skywalker at all in the article? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 19:26, June 4, 2016 (UTC)
    • Added. - Cwedin(talk) 03:42, June 5, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

  • Fair warning: Malakili has an entire POV interlude chapter in Aftermath: Life Debt. I have a feeling this is going to need to move to an FAnom once the article's updated. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:03, July 8, 2016 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the heads up, I'll update the article once I've got a copy. - Cwedin(talk) 06:09, July 9, 2016 (UTC)
  • Update: I've started rewriting the article, and as suspected, it's now well over 1,000 words. I'll renominate it as an FAnom once it's complete. - Cwedin(talk) 05:21, July 23, 2016 (UTC)