- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Mak Luunim
- Nominated by: ToRsO bOy 00:34, October 20, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Don't let my boss know I did this at work.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:25, October 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Hey boss! ToRsO bOy is goofing off on the job again!--Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 04:13, October 22, 2011 (UTC) 
Cavalier One
(Squadron channel)
1358 (Talk) 15:25, November 15, 2011 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:45, November 15, 2011 (UTC)
Object
First off, according to the LG, the Eras tag should be at the top of article, before the GAnom tag. I fixed it for you this time, though.- Noted. Thanks.
Next, you need to reload the infobox.- Sorry, but what do you mean by reload?
- I mean remove the one that's there and copy the infobox there again. There are some spots that are missing in the infobox, and even if they're not filled out, they should just be left empty.
- Done.
- I mean remove the one that's there and copy the infobox there again. There are some spots that are missing in the infobox, and even if they're not filled out, they should just be left empty.
- Sorry, but what do you mean by reload?
I took care of this, too, but things like "Prince" can be changed to "Princess" by just adding "ss" to the end of the link instead of pipelinking. So, it should look like this "[[Prince/Legends|Prince]]ss".- I knew I forgot something. Should have checked that on my previous nom. Thanks.
Some context on Luke Skywalker.- Done.
Context for Alderaan in the body.- Done.
"The two Rebels were accompanied by the smugglers Han Solo and Chewbacca, who provided transportation to Muunilinst, and X-7, the latter of whom the Rebels were unaware was actually an Imperial assassin secretly using the alias Tobin Elad." Can you re-state this somehow? As is, it is rather confusing.- Done.
The External Links need to be placed below the Notes and references.- Right you are. Let me correct the GA I copied the template from. Done.
- Take a look at my copy edit to see what I took care of.--Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 02:52, October 20, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Cal. ToRsO bOy 00:29, October 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Just take care of the infobox and I'll put a support. Good job, ToRsO!--Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 01:42, October 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Just take care of the infobox and I'll put a support. Good job, ToRsO!--Cal Jedi
- Thanks for the review Cal. ToRsO bOy 00:29, October 21, 2011 (UTC)
Place of death in the infobox?Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:34, October 20, 2011 (UTC)- Added. Thanks ToRsO bOy 00:29, October 21, 2011 (UTC)
Cav
The events leading to Luunim's death should be presented from his PoV, not from Organa's and Skywalker's. He is the focus of the article.- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 13:44, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
- Edited. ToRsO bOy 14:44, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
- There is still information misplaced. This is Luunim's article. Establish who he is, and then that he died in an airspeeder accident that was actually caused Kenuun and hired Stormtroopers. Then have Skywalker and Organa learn of his death and the subsequent raid and them learning the truth. It's Luunim's article; his PoV should take precedence. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:03, October 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Followed your summary.ToRsO bOy 00:38, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
- There is still information misplaced. This is Luunim's article. Establish who he is, and then that he died in an airspeeder accident that was actually caused Kenuun and hired Stormtroopers. Then have Skywalker and Organa learn of his death and the subsequent raid and them learning the truth. It's Luunim's article; his PoV should take precedence. - Cavalier One
- Edited. ToRsO bOy 14:44, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:45, November 15, 2011 (UTC)