Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Machineville

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Machineville

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 02:30, June 11, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A movement is accomplished in six stages, and the seventh brings return.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. 501st dogma(talk) 23:44, June 13, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:11, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
  3. When I first saw the name, for a second I thought it was "Machiavelli." For that reason, I decided I wanted to review it. :P —Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 14:06, June 25, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 11:38, June 27, 2013 (UTC)
  5. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 16:14, June 30, 2013 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:52, July 17, 2013 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Winterz (talk) 19:52, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. Ayrehead
    • Shouldn't the bombing of Taris be mentioned? Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:47, June 16, 2013 (UTC)
      • There's no conclusive link between Machineville and the bombing, Saying it was "likely destroyed" doesn't cut it. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 00:36, June 19, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:19, July 21, 2013 (UTC)


  • On second thoughts I won't make this an objection but I would of thought you could include a sentence at the end like "Much of the surface of Taris was destroyed in 3,956 BBY when the Sith Lord Darth Malak had the planet orbitally bombarded in an attempt to kill the Jedi Bastilla Shan" which doesn't conclusively say it was destroyed but gives the relevant info. Otherwise a bit in the Bts would work. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:11, June 19, 2013 (UTC)
    • Again, the article is directly about Machineville, not Taris - any link would be speculation. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 23:41, June 19, 2013 (UTC)