Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Luminous (battlecruiser)

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Luminous (battlecruiser)

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Looks Good <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 22:02, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:02, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 00:54, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:29, May 23, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 21:07, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 01:14, May 31, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Cav
  • Shouldn't the article be titled Luminous (battlecruiser) with a lower case "b". The source supports a lower case.
    • Deja vu. I've seen this objections before.. Done. 501st DogmaRepublic emblem(Comlink) 23:45, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
  • Likewise, the source only states that Luminous is a battlecruiser, not a Star Battlecruiser. Nit-picky? Yes. Accurate? Yes.
    • Completed
  • The Luminous was a Star Battlecruiser, part of the Imperial affiliated Kuati Sector Forces during the Galactic Civil War, - nothing states that the Luminous was part of the fleet during that time. Only that the Luminous was there in 8 ABY. That statement makes it seem that Luminous was stationed there for years, which is unconfirmed.
    • Done.
  • in 8.5 ABY,[2] during the Galactic Civil War, when the Galactic Empire fought against the Alliance to Restore the Republic, who whould later be known as the New Republic after their victory at Endor in 4 ABY. - this is a choppy sentence, jumping from 8.5 to 4 ABY in reverse chronological order. All that needs to be known is that the New Republic was fighting the Empire in 8.5 ABY, not the history.
    • Fixed.
  • Mention should be made of the transmission from Event Horizon to Venir that signalled Suprise Squadron to jump in.
    • Done.
  • When hailed by a representative of the New Republic, - lets not keep him anonymous. At least namecheck him and his position within the NR. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:24, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
  • More: description section is needed.
    • Done, but its short.
  • Mention of the NR gaining majority shareholding in KDY. - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:36, May 15, 2012 (UTC)
    • Added. 501st dogma(talk) 20:10, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

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