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Ludwin Katarkus

  • Nominated by: Dropbearemma LesbianRebellion (she/her) 04:17, 1 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: "I'm not GANing this." -- Me, 12th of February 2023
  • Date Archived: 19:39, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 339 words (86 introduction, 209 body, 44 behind the scenes)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 01:12, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:12, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 11:36, 6 April 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:16, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
  5. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 19:10, 13 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Braha
  • I think it would be worth expanding on the intro a tad with just some ever so brief stuff about them being there to mediate the civil war, the padawan surviving, and the holonet death announcement.
  • I'm a bit iffy about the "before the Clone Wars" part since the war begins a year after the Jedi's death, providing a yearish gap where they definitely could not have been taking in a padawan. I would like to suggest changing it to "before 23 BBY" instead. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 19:34, 3 March 2023 (UTC)
    • tried to improve the intro, how's that? Re: the date, the clone wars actually starts ~4 months after their death, because, their death is the last the last month of 23 BBY because GrS is out of sync. The crash is at the beginning of 13:2,and geonosis is 13:5:21. Happy to change it anyway, but I thought I would see if that alleviates your concerns first. Edit: actually since it's the last month of 23 BBY, would before 22 BBY be better? Idk Dropbearemma LesbianRebellion (she/her) 01:13, 4 March 2023 (UTC)
      • All good, after reading your point I don't feel strongly enough about that to really push for that much specificity. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 16:59, 5 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Intro says a funeral happened, bio only says it was announced to be happening the next day. Assuming the more accurate info is in the body, can you specify the intro instance that it was an announced thing? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 16:59, 5 March 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:17, 13 April 2023 (UTC)