Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Lucia

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Lucia

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 04:00, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Part of FloydProject: Path of Destruction.

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Good work Floyd. JangFett ^Talk 03:42, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
2. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 05:48, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
3. Mauser^Comlink 21:53, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
4. —Master Jonathan^{(Jedi Council Chambers)} 18:48, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
5. --Eyrezer 07:48, 11 August 2009 (UTC)
6. Please watch your linking, though. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:08, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
7. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:58, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Soresu
   • Lucia served in the Gloom Walkers under the command of Lieutenant Ulabore, and by the Battle of Phaseera in 1,002 BBY had seen relatively little combat but was still recognized as one of the best shots in the unit and served as a sniper in battle. Break it up. Also, there are two "served"s.
     • Addressed.
   • served as a junior officer. In 1,002 BBY, Lucia and the Gloom Walkers served in the Battle of Phaseera, an effort to capture the Republic manufacturing world of Phaseera. At that time, Lucia had seen little action, but was already regarded as one of the best shots in the unit and served as a sniper in combat. Three serves.
     • Addressed.
   • The Gloom Walkers were tasked with taking out a Republic outpost which was overlooking a valley that led to the Republic base camp in Phaseera's capital city, preventing the Brotherhood army from moving through the valley during the daytime without being spotted and their presence alerted to the Republic soldiers in the camp. Break it up. Otherwise, nice article. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 11:03, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
     • Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 05:07, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
2. Toprawa:
   • My only objection is a request to qualify this statement. "Seemed to" according to whom? Lucia? "Dessel seemed to retain his sight, even after the detonation of the flash canister" Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:05, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:58, September 9, 2009 (UTC)