Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Luce/Legends

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Luce/Legends

  • Nominated by: AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 16:08, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 06:53, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 593 words (89 introduction, 399 body, 105 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Nice job with this - I've seen some real improvement in your noms as of late. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:19, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 23:35, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 09:59, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
  4. Nice work! BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 20:42, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
  5. Lookin' good! NotBoop (talk) 01:38, 3 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Master Fredcerique
  • The "Biography" paragraph should be split. It's quite the wall of text.
  • I would assume there is another image we could use to illustrate the "Biography" section. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 20:32, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
Samonic
  • Any chance we can get a brighter image?
  • The pronouns field should mention Luce's pronouns. You should add Category:Individuals with she/her pronouns too.
  • The intro should mention who killed Luce.
  • The Bio's paragraphs should be split. If there's another quote, you should add it too. After doing this, you can probably move the Bio's image and add another image.
  • I don't think mentioning the Nightsisters' restoration and Gethzerion is necessary.
  • Does the episode say that "Luce was agile and strong" and "She also was very skilled with a variety of weapons"? If not, that part should be removed.
  • If Luce is Force-sensitive, the Bio should mention that. You should also add the Category:Force-sensitives category. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 11:05, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Adressed all except two. The Force-sensitives category would be redundant as Luce is in the Nightsisters category, but I did add that info to the bio and intro. I do have another photo of the scene which I am trying to brighten up in an editing software, but Dathomir as a whole is pretty dark in the episode. I'll see what I can do for that. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 13:22, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Brightened version of image added. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 21:15, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • At three body paragraphs there's no need for sectioning.
  • Anything we can link to for elder? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:30, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Sectioning removed. Elder isn't technically a position, just rather refers to a responsibility/role taken up by the older members of a society, so I'm not sure if you could really link that to anything. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 21:57, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Talzin may have been the leader of her clan, but is there really evidence to say she was Luce's master? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:07, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Would like to see the 20 BBY year worked into the intro.
  • Am seeing two sentences in the intro starting with 'During'—if those could be tweaked to vary slightly for variety would be great.
  • Infobox vs. body referencing uses differing sources for Dathomirian; should be made consistent. Per new precedent, first usage of 'her' in relation to Luce specifically should also match the infobox referencing for her pronouns.—spookywillowwtalk 21:01, 27 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to strike objection (AC only)

  1. ACvote As Sam's on Wookieevacation and has indicated he doesn't mind outstanding objections struck, starting the formal ball rolling on these so they don't hold up things.—spookywillowwtalk 19:36, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote :P Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 09:59, 2 May 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:52, 3 May 2023 (UTC)