Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Lomrokk

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Lomrokk

• Nominated by: Stake black ^msg 17:12, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 23:32, April 14, 2014 (UTC)
2. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 08:38, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
3. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:55, May 7, 2014 (UTC)
4. Bah, sorry I forgot about this. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 02:50, May 19, 2014 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:52, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

• Context for Jabba and the rancor. Also, please establish that Jabba's Palace was on Tatooine.
  • Done.
• His height is infobox-exclusive. You should add this to the P&t and mention that he is above the average of his species.
  • Please make this clearer: He also stood two heads taller than the average 1.80 meters.
    • Clarified. Stake black ^msg 20:16, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
• You need to mention and link his male sentience.
• Context for gundark and Jabba's Palace.
• Specify that his color was that of his skin.
• I'm not sure, buy maybe it would be better if you change this (19" tall) to 19 inches. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:35, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review! Have a second look. I left out issues with sentience because Gamorreans are all sentient, so it would be redundant (you wouldn't ask for the sentience of a Human character, for instance). Stake black ^msg 18:49, March 31, 2014 (UTC)
• As a note, some of the objections above are still unaddressed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 19:44, April 18, 2014 (UTC)
  • Addressed. Stake black ^msg 13:16, April 19, 2014 (UTC)
    • Take a look at my edit please. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:45, April 20, 2014 (UTC)
• The Longo Two-Guns article mentions his date of death as 32 BBY. If that is correct, the date should be given when you mention the events of his execution. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:45, April 20, 2014 (UTC)
  • Good idea! Stake black ^msg 20:25, April 21, 2014 (UTC)

Code-8

• Do you think the gundark is relevant enough for its own article? Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 01:27, April 14, 2014 (UTC)
  • I don't think so. For the same reason we don't have an article on the acklay that Obi-Wan kills in Episode II. Stake black ^msg 15:05, April 14, 2014 (UTC)
  • Just found that one here :) But thinking about it its probably not relevant enough. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 23:32, April 14, 2014 (UTC)

El Jefe

• First sentence of the Bio oughta be split up. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 04:55, May 2, 2014 (UTC)
  • You mean the second one, right? If so, done. Stake black ^msg 15:52, May 2, 2014 (UTC)

Toprawa

• A Boy and his Monster cannot be used as an exclusive source for these ABY dates, as these dates are only indirectly inferred from its story, not stated outright. You will need a secondary source or a reference note to explain why these dates work: "which took place between 0 and 4 ABY."
  • Referenced. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 19:33, June 3, 2014 (UTC)
• Same here. I'm pretty sure the Bounty Hunter game does not state a date of 32 BBY. You're gleaning that from other information that you know occurred in that year, but this article requires an actual source or reference note explaining how/why 32 BBY is correct: "In 32 BBY"
  • Sourced. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 19:33, June 3, 2014 (UTC)
• All of those artists mentioned in the BTS are credited for working on an official Star Wars product and are therefore deserving of articles. You will need to fill in enough of them to satisfy the GAN redlink rule.
  • Created all. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 19:33, June 3, 2014 (UTC)
• The idea of ambiguous canon, despite being nonexistent now, is something we basically create and propagate ourselves. Nothing in that SW Blog article says anything about raising the Sideshow story to ambiguous canon. That statement is purely your creation and should be removed. If you're treating this article as Legends canon because of this Blog info, then just say that outright without using the meaningless "ambiguous" adjective. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:28, May 25, 2014 (UTC)
  • Rephrased, please have a look. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 19:33, June 3, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:52, June 3, 2014 (UTC)