- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Lomina Argo
- Nominated by: —Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 01:34, March 11, 2012 (UTC) - Nomination comments:Current CA that has grown over 250 words.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:46, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
- Jinzler 21:18, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
I remember when we CANed these clowns. Good times. Menkooroo 02:20, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:30, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 14:34, March 28, 2012 (UTC)
Object
The intro is nearly as long as and basically identical to the bio. It really should be quite a bit shorter. That'll likely bring the article below 250 words, but to be honest, I think the article was fine as a 165-word CA.Menkooroo 01:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)- I've shortened up the intro, but it's still at 250 words by my count.—Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 01:51, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
- I've shortened up the intro, but it's still at 250 words by my count.—Cal Jedi
Forgive my earlier cynicism. :P The article looks great. One thing that we missed when we wrote these clowns up was that since the authors and artist aren't mentioned in the article itself, sourcing the HoloNet News credits is probably appropriate. I just added it to Hraashi Lool's BTS; check it out to see what I mean.Menkooroo 02:06, March 21, 2012 (UTC)- No worries. Thanks for finding that, and see what you think. Thanks for the review!—Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 02:17, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
- No worries. Thanks for finding that, and see what you think. Thanks for the review!—Cal Jedi
Lee' charge
After hearing a statement by Jedi Master Coleman Trebor, in which Trebor stated that the infant's mind had been opened to the Force and that returning the child to her mother might prove dangerous: Please reword one of those: "statement/stated".- Done.
You can mention her opinion about the case in the P&T.- Added.
Also, her blue clothing can be mentioned.- Done.
- Good job, personally I favor this promotion to GA and hope that you can keep it over or at 250 words. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:07, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. After taking care of your objections, the article is currently resting at 276 words by my count.—Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 15:58, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. After taking care of your objections, the article is currently resting at 276 words by my count.—Cal Jedi
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:50, March 29, 2012 (UTC)