Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Lomabuan

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Lomabuan

  • Nominated by: Eyrezer 09:16, March 25, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Loma, bomba...

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:30, March 26, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Never heard of these guys before! ~SavageBOB sig 16:06, March 26, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Good stuff. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:43, March 31, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 02:39, April 21, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote To the queue with ye! Menkooroo 05:07, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • The Lomabuans developed a civilization on Lomabu III: Context for Lomabu III.
  • The first two paragraphs of the "History" section seem like to much context for me. Can you cut them down a little bit or please state why you give that much context.
  • Good work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 15:52, March 25, 2012 (UTC)
    • I have made a couple of edits. I rearranged the first History paragraph to make more directly connected with the Lomabuans. The second paragraph contain information quite common in species articles -- see for instance the History section of recently passed Featured Article, Amaran. Thanks for the review. --Eyrezer 07:02, March 26, 2012 (UTC)
Jujiggum
  • The last paragraph of the History section could be condensed a bit; there's a little too much info that isn't entirely relevant to the species. Otherwise, very nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:17, March 27, 2012 (UTC)
    • Cheers Jon. Shortened a bit. --Eyrezer 00:26, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:52, April 22, 2012 (UTC)