- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
LobwuWa Loba
- Nominated by: NaruHina Talk
23:52, February 1, 2012 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Now if only they'd say the only reason they knew about this was because we started the CAN...
(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
- graestan(talk) 19:26, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
- Assuming Cal is satisfied. Hanzo Hasashi 21:12, February 6, 2012 (UTC)
- MasterFred
(Whatever) 21:32, February 10, 2012 (UTC) - Really needed fourth user vote. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:22, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
Always nice to see a CA make it to GA. Good work.—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 14:27, February 29, 2012 (UTC)- Menkooroo 01:21, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 14:07, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Jangeth
Please reload your infobox. Also, what is the purpose of the NOTC tag? More to come. JangFett (Talk) 01:11, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
Return of the Jedi
As a start, I think the intro should be expanded a bit. It looks small and sickly compared up to the rest of the article right now. I'll start my review when I get a chance.—Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 03:24, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
- Got it to two lines. There's really not much to say. NaruHina Talk 19:23, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
- Added a tiny blurb about watching the Boonta Eve Classic as a spectator. Need more? graestan(talk) 13:11, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
- Looks much better. I'll finish my review soon.—Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 14:56, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
- Looks much better. I'll finish my review soon.—Cal Jedi
- Added a tiny blurb about watching the Boonta Eve Classic as a spectator. Need more? graestan(talk) 13:11, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
- Got it to two lines. There's really not much to say. NaruHina Talk
Some more stuff can be added to the P & T, I think. Some stuff about his desire and ability to podrace, etc. are pertinent P & T material.—Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 02:47, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
- I've always thought things like this fall too close to speculation when we don't know anything about his personality. He could have been lazy, it could have been easy for him, blah, blah, blah. Added anyway. NaruHina Talk 17:17, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
- I said nothing about adding speculation. He obviously did have the ability to podrace, otherwise he wouldn't have been doing it. You also yourself state in the article that he "wanted to pilot podracers for a living." If this sentence is correct, then he did have a desire to race. The things I mentioned are not speculation.—Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 22:44, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
- I said it veers close to speculation and in many cases—this one actually being something of an exception because of those things—it does in my view. It's just that I don't see someone doing something on screen (refusing medical attention so someone else can have it, killing a child to spare a kingdom) as part of their personality, how they operate in the world at all times, if they haven't been properly fleshed out. If it's not in the text that they "slit the child's throat gladly to protect the town" I find it difficult to say that's a source to say "he was ruthless in the defense of his village" because he may have hated doing it, but even in that case "willing to do anything to save his home" would probably be better. It reads as subjective to me. That's all I was saying. NaruHina Talk 17:26, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
- I said it veers close to speculation and in many cases—this one actually being something of an exception because of those things—it does in my view. It's just that I don't see someone doing something on screen (refusing medical attention so someone else can have it, killing a child to spare a kingdom) as part of their personality, how they operate in the world at all times, if they haven't been properly fleshed out. If it's not in the text that they "slit the child's throat gladly to protect the town" I find it difficult to say that's a source to say "he was ruthless in the defense of his village" because he may have hated doing it, but even in that case "willing to do anything to save his home" would probably be better. It reads as subjective to me. That's all I was saying. NaruHina Talk
- I said nothing about adding speculation. He obviously did have the ability to podrace, otherwise he wouldn't have been doing it. You also yourself state in the article that he "wanted to pilot podracers for a living." If this sentence is correct, then he did have a desire to race. The things I mentioned are not speculation.—Cal Jedi
- I've always thought things like this fall too close to speculation when we don't know anything about his personality. He could have been lazy, it could have been easy for him, blah, blah, blah. Added anyway. NaruHina Talk
graestan
Does the book actually refer to him as thuggish-looking, or is that an inference drawn from the image? graestan(talk) 17:28, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
Aqua
Good work. There seems to be the slightest of discrepancies between the infobox and body regarding hair and skin colors, though. Things as specific as "light" should carry from one to the other. I'd sofixit but I'm not sure which is correct.Menkooroo 19:00, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
The winner of the race had been predetermined by the Hutt crime lord Jabba Desilijic Tiure. - do we know who the winner was?- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 11:44, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:07, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
- You might want to add that he was present during TPM's Boonta Eve Podrace in the intro, but I've seen other quality articles that don't list those specific details, so I won't object if you don't. Hanzo Hasashi 21:13, February 6, 2012 (UTC)