Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Llaban

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Llaban

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 04:11, November 14, 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Floyd strikes again!

(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)

Support

1. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 10:41, November 23, 2009 (UTC)
2. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 23:59, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
3. Empress, I'm receiving another vote! --Skippy Farlstendoiro 11:16, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
4. Looks good. Gmalek
5. Too bad my vote doesn't put you over the edge, since I'm not AgCorp. ~ SavageBob 06:10, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
6. Providing Tope's objections are addressed. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 22:27, December 7, 2009 (UTC)
7. --Xd1358 ^Talk 14:36, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
8. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:33, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Soresu, with a legato touch
   • Its unclear in the intro how he goes from Rebel leader to Tetan commander. Please clarify.
     • Addressed.
       • Still confusing. You need to mention the amnesty, otherwise there seems to be no motive. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 05:21, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
         • Addressed.
   • In the body, you haven't explained his motives for joining the Tetan forces, which according ot the quote is amnesty.
     • Addressed.
   • The large Sith fleet appeared and the sky, Doesn't make sense. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 09:30, November 17, 2009 (UTC)
     • Bah! Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 03:17, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
2. Skippy, with a single objection
   • As seen in pic, Llaban had some tattoos, war paints or marks on his face. If their nature is known, this should be mentioned under P&T; if not, at least under BtS. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:05, November 24, 2009 (UTC)
     • Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 00:01, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
3. Toprawa:
   • I would request that you choose a slightly less POV word than "valiantly" here: "Although Llaban and his army fought valiantly against the Sith"
     • Addressed.
   • As with your other articles, please arrange the Appearances to reflect only the issues of the comic he actually appears in.
     • Addressed.
   • Also, the BTS says this comic was released in 1996, but that article says it's 1997. Please make sure what you have is correct. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:44, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
     • Addressed. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 00:57, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:33, December 11, 2009 (UTC)