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Lizard Warrior

  • Nominated by: ~ SavageBob 13:35, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: OK, fine. Let's go for a hat-trick. L is for Lizard Warrior. ~ SavageBob 13:35, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 02:56, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote --Eyrezer 23:59, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
  3. —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 23:31, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
  4. ACvote I'm not a big fan of your referencing, but to each his own. Chack Jadson (Talk) 12:49, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
  5. JangFett Talk 20:48, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. One thing: The last two paragraphs of History have a lot of choppy sentences. Merge some together. Other than that, good work. IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 02:21, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
    • I've tried to massage it a bit more; is that better? ~ SavageBob 02:56, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
  2. From the Council Chambers:
    • "Graak, on the other hand, was left to his fate.": What fate? It's a bit unclear as it stands.
    • Otherwise looks good. 1210 words, so you might want to consider going for FA once this passes. —Master Jonathan(Jedi Council Chambers) 18:08, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the review! I've made it more explicit; is that better? And, yeah, this may end up on the FAN page one of these days! ~ SavageBob 06:29, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
  3. Fett
    • Were they called the "Lizard Warrior" in Ewoks 4? Possibly it falls under a conjectural title, because it not having a canonical name. Perhaps adding {{nickname}}
    • Other than that, great work man. Interesting read. JangFett Talk 23:34, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
      • Yeah, they are called "Lizard Warriors" in the comic. It could be a nickname given them by the Ewoks, but we can't really speculate about that one way or the other without more evidence. What do you think? ~ SavageBob 14:07, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
        • Possibly {{conjecture}} will do since we're not aware of their true canonical name. Probably say "This species, named the Lizard Warrior by the Ewoks," JangFett Talk 15:19, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
          • I guess I mean, how do we know it's conjecture? Why is "Lizard Warrior" treated any differently from Mimph or Strutter or Gorax or Teek? I actually think it takes more conjecture to not consider it the real name than to just take the comic for what it says. ~ SavageBob 20:45, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
            • Yeah, I see what you mean SavageBob :) All right then, great work.

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:56, 13 August 2009 (UTC)