Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Liz Marsham

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Liz Marsham

• Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 09:43, 14 February 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:PRIDE, WP:CREA, WP:NOVELS, WP:VG

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:25, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
2. — Samonic (Talk) 14:30, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:07, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 14:46, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:53, 5 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha

• Context needed for TomatoFarm. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 13:23, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk)

CC-8

• Is it possible to find even a rough date for when the two apps were retired? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:06, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
  • I searched far and wide before writing up this article, and gave it another pass now as well. I can't seem to find anything. No news article nor official closure date from Disney. Just that one long Disney Interactive page listing retired apps. There aren't even any wayback machine archives for that page that go back beyond 2019, so we can't even estimate which year they were retired. Dentface (talk) 07:25, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
• The second half of the first bio paragraph doesn't need to operate like an intro, it's a little confusing to see those elements listed there and then have them described later. Same with "Marsham went on to write a single short story for the imprint as a freelancer."
• The citation notes for the work on Galactic Adventures Storybook should all be using {{Shortstory}}
• Could use a body image of one of the apps or the short story Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:56, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Bio paragraphs: Adjusted.
    • The part I put in quotes is still there, I think it can be removed entirely Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:13, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Done. Dentface (talk) 20:00, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Citation: Fixed.
  • Body image: Added Dentface (talk) 06:41, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
• For the bibliography table I think only one reference is needed at the end, since books come with publication years Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:13, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 19:49, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
• I believe I caused some confusion earlier, still need to properly introduce the subject at the start of the biography section, eg using her first name and specifying her nationality Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:14, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 17:08, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• I'm new to reviewing OOU people, is it a precedent practice to just say "they wrote a short story" without elaboration?
• My copy-edit. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 13:23, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
  • I did that because it was the intro paragraph, and it would later be expanded upon down below. If you think it'd be better to just state the title of the short story, then I can do so. Dentface (talk) 23:49, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Eh I see what you mean now. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:25, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:53, 5 May 2022 (UTC)