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Linwodo
- Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 07:01, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
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Support
- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 19:37, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
- — Samonic
09:37, 7 April 2022 (UTC) - ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 01:43, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
OOM 224 16:10, 1 May 2022 (UTC)- 1358 (Talk) 18:16, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:32, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
Object
Braha'wodo
Think Claatuvac Guild could use some context.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 19:06, 5 April 2022 (UTC)- Thought so. Added. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 19:19, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
OOM
Similar to character articles for organics, it's best not to repeat the same physical details of an individual between the Biography and, in this case, the Characteristics section.OOM 224 18:00, 29 April 2022 (UTC)- Very well. Changed. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 15:44, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
Ecks
The introduction should make it clear that the Battle of Kashyyyk was a CIS loss; right now the wording could imply that the battle ended either way. The body is not super-clear either and could definitely clarify that it wasn't just Linwodo who lost, it was the entire CIS.- "Opposed by the Wookiee warriors of the Kachirho Wookiee Militia[2] led by General Tarfful[5] and Republic clone troopers commanded by Jedi Generals Luminara Unduli and Quinlan Vos, both of whom had their battlefield records studied by Linwodo." This is not a complete sentence, something is missing.
Is the bit about him examining the battlefield records of the Jedi worth a mention in the Characteristics?1358 (Talk) 17:26, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:32, 3 May 2022 (UTC)