Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Liberation of Gerrard V

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Liberation of Gerrard V

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Support

  1. DjMack 19:46, 27 June 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. The Anvil
    • Add the (goodnom) tag.
    • Source infobox.
    • Unsource opening.
    • Beginning of "background" could use a rewrite.
    • No BTS?
    • No quotes?
    • The quote you do have in there needs to be formatted properly, and devoid of pipelinks.
    • Cursory glance.—Tommy9281 Red lightsaber (Peace is a lie) 10:08, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
  2. Xadún's Dun Möch:
    • "A failed revolt against the Empire had taken place two years prior." Ends abruptly for an opening, just round off this sentence.
    • The whole "The initial revolt" section could do with improving. It's just short sentences and sounds really disjointed. Make it flow more. Also, Moff is a title and is capitalized.
    • "128th Counterattack" - Open a section straight away with a quote if you decide to have one. Consult the Manuel of Style for help with your layout. This shuld help with some of your linking too.
    • Echoing Tommy, for a first attempt at a GAN it's ok. A lot can be improved, but don't let people's criticisms put you off. Take them in your stride and correct them. The next GAN you do will be even better as a result! Ask if you need help. Darth Xadún(Consult the Holocron) 20:55, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments

  • Nice to see a different user up here for a change. DjMack, please remember to leave a note on the GAN page after you've addressed any objections, so the objector knows to go and have a looksee. You're doing fine by the way, and if you need help with any of the others, just ask.—Tommy9281 Red lightsaber (Peace is a lie) 16:16, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
  • Thanks. Actually, I've been here for a few years, I think suppressed my Star Wars obsession for a long time, which recently exploded. Hence I'm back here again. ;) DjMack 00:02, 6 July 2008 (UTC)