Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Lengilese

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Lengilese

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 06:09, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 17:03, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 547 words (101 introduction, 382 body, 64 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:52, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 15:26, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
  3. OOM 224 (he/him) 09:37, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:37, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
  5. Booply (talk) 15:43, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

Object

OOM
  • In American English, collective nouns like Lengilese are typically treated as singular, i.e. use "was" instead of "were," so that should be made consistent in the article. To make things simpler, I also suggest rewording the intro to "The Lengilese civilization was lost by 3 ABY, according to the rogue archaeologist Doctor Chelli Lona Aphra." OOM 224 (he/him) 16:24, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Updated the wording Lewisr (talk) 01:58, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Since the Lengilese are established to be a civilization, I feel like the organization infobox could be used with the disolved by date filled in. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:58, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
    • I did consider but was a bit hesistant due to the reference of them being lost came when Aphra was trying to fool Lady Proxima. How's that? Lewisr (talk) 16:32, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • I've removed TLJ junior novel ref as Ultimate Star Wars, New Edition says that Canto Bight was "the planetary capital," but please feel free to add it back if I'm missing something. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:52, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
    • All good thanks, I somehow missed that while I was looking on that page of the book:P Lewisr (talk) 23:58, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:03, 26 November 2023 (UTC)