Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Lemcke

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Lemcke

  • Nominated by: Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 07:21, 22 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I present.... Lemcke nomination!
  • Date Archived: 00:01, 6 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 646 words (114 introduction, 378 body, 154 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 580 words (112 introduction, 362 body, 106 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support votes

  1. StarWarsFan327 (talk) 11:32, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
  2. Gonky1138 (talk) 14:30, 18 May 2025 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Wok142 (talk) 22:14, 4 June 2025 (UTC)
  4. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 23:27, 5 June 2025 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 00:00, 6 June 2025 (UTC)

Objections

StarWarsFan
  • Lemcke was first ID as 'Brother' Lemcke in the episode guide. I think the biography should reflect this.
  • In the BTS, "Water War" premiered on September 16, 2011. All I see for January 27, 2012 is the premiere of "Friends and Enemies." If this is the case, it should just be corrected to the "Water War" premiere date.
  • The Legends episode guide for "Prisoners" also has appearances of Lemcke, so it should be added to the list of sources. -StarWarsFan327 (talk) 20:37, 15 May 2025 (UTC)
    • To clarify, I mean the older no live episode guide. - StarWarsFan327 (talk) 21:03, 15 May 2025 (UTC)
    • Done! thank you for reviewing! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 02:33, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
spookly
  • Seems like in at least one case (the BTS lighting concept ref) the individual concept art gallery should be sourced, as a component of the EG, rather than just the EG. And, for slide number to be denoted. Though that instance pops out, if there's any other refs to the EG that should be otherwise swapped out to the story gallery/not the shell page, should also be done.—spookywillowwtalk 13:47, 30 May 2025 (UTC)
    • Thanks for reminding me about that, I've been doing it since you told me that one time but I forgot to update Lemcke since then, fixed! Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 15:40, 30 May 2025 (UTC)
  • It's precedent to directly contextualize conflicts - in this case the Clone Wars - upon its first mention as a conflict between X and X factions, so in this case between the Galactic Republic and Confederacy of Independent Systems. Though these are each mentioned later on, its still usually done on first mention of the event for event context itself even if before or after.—spookywillowwtalk 16:25, 1 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Also sort of inconsistent that the Biography image caption is present tense, and the Equipment one is past tense (and that one is also a full sentence, thus needing punctuation). On such a short article, it might be a bit better if one tense was picked for both.—spookywillowwtalk 16:26, 1 June 2025 (UTC)
Wok
  • I'd advocate for the trimming of "Lemcke did not accompany Lee-Char during the battle" from the intro, not really a necessary thing to explicitly state in my opinion. I think it works fine in the body, but in the intro I think it'd be better without it.
  • Lemcke appears to have some yellow facial markings that can be note
    • Addressed the two above Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 07:35, 3 June 2025 (UTC)
  • Honestly not sure but should "Mon Calamari and Quarren people" be plural as peoples? If they are being referred to as two distinct groups, then probably (ie the Quarren people and the Mon Calamari people; the Quarren and Mon Calamari peoples). But if they are being referred to as one group, then it should remain singular (ie the people of Mon Cala). It would really work either way but it kinda depends what you prefer. What are your thoughts? Wok142 (talk) 21:19, 1 June 2025 (UTC)
    • Added the S for "peoples." Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 07:35, 3 June 2025 (UTC)
      • That works! Wok142 (talk) 22:14, 4 June 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:00, 6 June 2025 (UTC)