Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Lean Nuuti Bar and Grill

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Lean Nuuti Bar and Grill

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma(talk) 16:17, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I don't really want to know what a Nuuti is....

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote That's the leanest Nuuti I've ever seen. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:23, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Nice work. Winterz (talk) 23:46, January 2, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:41, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Good job. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:07, January 16, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Good job there, laddy! WP:ENT! MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 19:15, January 18, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • Would it be appropriate to create an article/link a redlink for this character? "and another crew member went to clarify" Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:19, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
    • Created an article. 501st dogma(talk) 00:40, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
Fred stikes!
  • The two halves of the second sentence in "History" seem unrelated. The tables being looked after doesn't have anything to do with the atmosphere of the bar. Connecting them, especially with "having," makes them read as if they are supposed to be related. Not really an objection, but more a suggestion. Perhaps reword or rearrange just a tad? If you don't agree, that's fine. It's more of a suggestion.
    • I fixed it in the Description section, which is what I assume you meant.
      • Ah yes, my bad. :P
  • Maybe a tad bit of context on "autojuke"? Just mention what one is used for.
    • Added.
  • Fixed a typo in the Bts. :P Great job. Enjoyed reading. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 19:30, January 17, 2013 (UTC)
    • Thanks for looking it over. 501st dogma(talk) 21:25, January 17, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:59, January 19, 2013 (UTC)