Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Larrim

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Larrim

• Nominated by: SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 08:54, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Last notable KotOR NPC that appears solely in the South Apartments

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. "Wanna vote, Skippy?" "Well, of course not, don't be ridiculous, Cousin Larrim!" --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:30, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
2. Good job.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:34, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 20:37, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
4. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 17:19, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
5. Grunny ^(Talk) 14:39, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Skippy found a possible typo
   • BtS: Therefore, it is undetermined whether Revan ever interacted with Kadir and, if so, (…) Do you mean with Larrim? Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
     • Doh! The BTS was mostly a cut-and-paste, and I managed to miss that. Fixed. Thanks for the review Farl. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 09:26, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
2. The Grand Master
   • Is it explicitly stated that his homeworld is Taris? If so, this should be specified in the bio; and if not, it should be removed from the infobox.
     • No it isn't stated. Removed.
   • "Therefore, it is undetermined whether Revan ever interacted with Larrim and, if so, the exact form that the conversation took." Please check your grammar here.
     • It reads fine to me. What in particular sounds incorrect?
       • Due to the ordering, the last bit essentially reads: "it is undetermined the exact form that the conversation took."
         • Addressed, hopefully. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 04:42, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
   • Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 15:13, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 02:10, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:39, December 3, 2009 (UTC)