Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Lanchu Skaa

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Lanchu Skaa

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:57, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First Secret Missions nom

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Looks good.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 04:19, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
2. Assuming Xd's objections are dealt with to his satisfaction. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:49, September 1, 2010 (UTC)
3. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 14:43, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
   • Oh hey you missed a strike Xd. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 14:50, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
     • Bah, thanks for that. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 14:53, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
4. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 14:50, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
   • Hey you missed a strike Soresu. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:00, September 2, 2010 (UTC)
     • Haha Soresu :P -- 1358 ^(Talk) 09:09, September 4, 2010 (UTC)
       • LOL! My mind works in very strange ways :D SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 04:47, September 5, 2010 (UTC)
5. CC7567 ^(talk) 00:15, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Please check your linking. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 11:22, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
   • Checked and fixed several errors. Thank you. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:30, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Xd1358

• "Sometime before or during the year 22 BBY he took the Chiss Nuru Kungurama as his Padawan. During the same year.." What, same year? You have only mentioned "before or during 22 BBY", which isn't a year.
  • Fixed.
• "..the Jedi sent a task force to rescue the trio from execution.^[1] Master Skaa was part of the task force.." Please find a synonym for task force.
  • Fixed.
• "Skaa was killed on the mission.." Please see what's wrong with that.
  • Fixed.
• "Both Ambase and Kungurama missed Skaa during the ensuing Clone Wars." Sounds strange. Perhaps you could replace missed with something else, like mourn?
  • Fixed.
• In the body, can you give some context on who captured Kenobi, Skywalker and Amidala? While I understand that this isn't really relevant to Skaa, I feel that something small, like "Separatist" would suit.
  • Added.
    • Oh, please not Separatist Alliance. :( That's some stupid TCW thing. XD
      • OK.
• No quotes?
  • No. Two :P Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:24, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
• -- 1358 ^(Talk) 18:13, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:24, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
• Please make the image larger. If it messes with the headers, it can always be aligned right instead. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 14:13, September 1, 2010 (UTC)
  • Enlarged. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:17, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

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