Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ky'lessan

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Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 06:05, October 19, 2009 (UTC)
Nomination comments: An alien species not beginning with an S. I know I'm going to regret this…

Support

Not only does their name not start with S, they can't even pronounce S! You've done it now, Skippy! ~ SavageBob 06:36, October 23, 2009 (UTC)
SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 06:23, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
--Eyrezer 08:39, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:42, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 17:50, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Object

Soresu
- ~~Just checking the intro quote and the word "thirs". Is that "s" actually in the soure? Since he doesn't usually pronounce "s". Or is this isolated to plurals.~~ SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 11:51, October 26, 2009 (UTC)
  - Yeth it ith. Added info on exceptions for their lisp. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:31, October 26, 2009 (UTC)
    - I have absolutely not idea what what you wrote means, but I take it you know what you're doing. :) SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 06:23, October 27, 2009 (UTC)
The Grand Master
- In the intro you say Snake-Eyes was the "right-hand sentient" of Bloodhawk, and betrayed his partner for profit; however, in the main body, you never identify Bloodhawk as his partner, nor do you specify that he "betrayed her for profit"; only that he kidnapped her. Remember, no information should be present only in the intro.
- ~~Also, "right-hand sentient" sounds a little too colloquial.~~
- Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 21:19, November 5, 2009 (UTC)
  - Both done. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 07:55, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

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