Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kueller

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Kueller

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Support

1. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 15:00, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
2. Owns Brakiss. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 21:41, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
3. -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 14:22, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
4. When he gets FAed, will he move into Castle Grayskull?--Goodwood ^{(Alliance Intelligence)} 23:20, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
5. Lemme have a real crack at this…—Tommy9281 ^{(Peace is a lie)} 13:21, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

Object

1. Dolph!:
   • I dislike starting the intro so suddenly.
     • Opening adjusted. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
   • Little context on thernbee.
     • Placed some. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
   • Context on ysalamir.
   • Is Force-empty a canonical term?
     • I do believe so, but I've reworded it. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
   • You mention that he starts wearing a death head mask twice in the body.
     • Fixed. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
   • Has he caused any deaths when you first mention that he fed on the deaths? Or are you simply referring to what he did on Almania? If so, please move it.
     • Clarified. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
   • Any info on these traps Femon had planned?
     • Got some. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
   • Please rephrase this or split it into separate sentences. It shifts from Luke POV to Kueller’s, and could be written a little better.
     • Are you referring to the overall article, or specific parts. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
       • Sorry. Right here: "Though he survived the crash, he was badly injured and, after letting the Jedi wander through deserted Pydyr for some time, Kueller confronted him." Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:49, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
         • Fixed, thanks. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:45, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
   • What are these warnings he gave Yanne?
     • I'm pretty sure I stated that Kueller warned him of the consequences of disloyalty. I'm not sure exactly what you're looking for. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
   • Her name is Femon, not Yemon. I fixed these for you though. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 13:43, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
     • Thanks. Getting my henchmen (Femon and Yanne) mixed up. :-P Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments

• Not up for FA yet because I need to research BTS and get a few more sources. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 15:00, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
  • Just waiting for this GAN to clear. ;-) Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 13:40, 23 July 2008 (UTC)