Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ktriss

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Ktriss

• Nominated by: —Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 17:19, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The original Dark Lizard of the Sith.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 01:04, 15 March 2009 (UTC)
2. Interesting pet. Cylka^-talk- 11:44, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
3. --Eyrezer 23:28, 20 March 2009 (UTC)
4. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:20, 25 March 2009 (UTC)
5. Grunny ^(Talk) 11:24, 25 March 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Soresu
   • The Death of Roko section is unsourced.
     • Woops. Addressed.
   • Ktriss lay at her master's feet as pirate Captain Finhead Stonebone, the leader of the gang, was brought before them. Can we something other than feet? Hutts don't exactly have any.SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 06:13, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
     • True indeed. Addressed, TwoThree. Thanks for the review!—Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 20:38, 14 March 2009 (UTC)
2. Nice idea for an article, by the way. Is the word familiar used in the actual sources? My main objection is that in the Traits section you refer to Bogga as Ktriss' familiar. I am fairly certain it only works the other way. --Eyrezer 08:30, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
   • Yeah, the text calls Ktriss Bogga's "dark side familiar". Thanks for the review, Eyr.—Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 18:20, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
     • Ok. you still need to fix the reference to Bogga as Ktriss' familiar though. I checked, it only refers to the animal, not the owner. --Eyrezer 12:04, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
       • I fixed it myself. Easy enough to do. --Eyrezer 23:28, 20 March 2009 (UTC)
3. The use of the word "mate" is slightly bothering me. Do you mean mate as in "friend" (as seems to be implied by the bio with the phrase "best mate"), or mate as in naval terminology? I think this needs to be a little clearer. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:52, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
   • Hey, Cav. You are correct in thinking I meant naval terms, but it has been changed to read first mate. Thanks for the review!—Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 18:20, 18 March 2009 (UTC)

Comments

• If by some chance I am missing some info from a source or reference book, please notify me, and I'll add it. I checked, however, and do not believe this to be the case. Also, the "Traits and abilities" is named so because Ktriss is a pet; she doesn't really have a personality, per se, but she does demonstrate a set of traits and abilities.—Tommy ^{(Nine two eight one)} 17:19, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:24, 25 March 2009 (UTC)