Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Krav Noblis

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Krav Noblis

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 06:05, June 21, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Now wakes the owl, now sleeps the swan, behold a dream, the dream is gone.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:36, June 22, 2014 (UTC)
  2. 501st dogma(talk) 22:51, June 22, 2014 (UTC)
  3. --Emperor Jarjarkine GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Senate Hall 22:25, June 25, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 13:30, July 2, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:41, July 2, 2014 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:42, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • Context for Wayland in the intro please.
  • a bounty on the planet Wayland—however, the planet was under a Mandalorian attack: Could you vary the use of "planet" here?
  • Is the Constable article-worthy?
  • Good read, Shakespeare. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:01, June 21, 2014 (UTC)
501st
  • One thing: The intro says that he ran The Adjudicator, while the body doesn't specifically say this, only saying that he penned columns for the paper. Can you remedy this? 501st dogma(talk) 11:59, June 22, 2014 (UTC)
Grunny
  • "and held a deep distaste for assassin droids—although Noblis considered it a smart move for bounty hunters to use droids as backup, Noblis despised autonomous droids that the hunter felt were out to take his livelihood.[2] Noblis frequently penned columns for The Adjudicator, and wrote with a very informal, conversational style. Noblis had pointed, fuzzy ears.[2]" Should the first reference be removed or should one of the references point to a different source? grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 07:32, June 29, 2014 (UTC)
  • "that the hunter felt were out to take his livelihood." – You use "his" here, but the rest of the article and the category suggests Noblis's gender is unspecified. Is it specified anywhere in the source material, or should this be reworded to avoid that? grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 08:49, June 30, 2014 (UTC)
    • When I first wrote the article I mistakenly wrote it as if Noblis is male, when it is unspecified. I guess I missed this instance when I went through to fix that. Should be rectified. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 03:39, July 2, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:43, July 3, 2014 (UTC)