Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Korto Vos

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Korto Vos

  • Nominated by: Menkooroo 12:50, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Come on, live-action series. Make this guy a star.

(5 ACs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote As usual, nice job Menk. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 15:59, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:41, July 10, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 23:24, July 10, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:41, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Hanzo Hasashi 15:10, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:02, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • I have a bit of an issue with the way both of the Jedi Masters' names are pipelinked into the words "Jedi" and "Master." I find such pipelinking to be somewhat misleading, since someone clicking those links might literally be trying to find info on Jedi/Jedi Masters. I would suggest perhaps moving the pipelinks into "two" and "other" instead: "and two other Jedi Masters"
    • Good advice. Done.
  • Sort of not keen on what kind of reads initially as a discrepancy in description here. In one sentence Quinlan is described as "alive and well," but in the next sentence he's gravely injured. This could perhaps be resolved by simply adding "kept the previously gravely injured...": "Quinlan was in fact alive and well, and he arrived at the cave as they listened, accompanied by the Devaronian smuggler Vilmarh Grahrk. Grahrk had kept the gravely injured Quinlan safe from traitorous clone troopers"
    • Did a little bit of rejigging. See how it looks.
  • Not an objection, but, unlike "offworld," I have never seen "onworld" used as a single word like that in canon. If it does exist, feel free to de-hyphenate it.
    • I think you're right on this one. Thanks for the change and the review.
  • I like how you found a way to list multiple CSWE entries in a single bulleted item. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:59, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
    • Full credit goes to Bob on this one. :) Menkooroo 01:36, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Comments


  • I followed a precedent and didn't give him a P&t section, seeing as he's a baby and all. See the bio for a couple of lines about his hair colour and penchant for grabbing at dangly things and stuff. Menkooroo 12:50, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
  • In the online fanfic Generations of the Sith, he grows up to be a New Republic General IIRC. Hanzo Hasashi 15:10, July 13, 2011 (UTC)