Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kolto/Legends

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Kolto

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Support

  1. After a good deal of work on it, I think it deserves a nomination. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) NR Seal 19:50, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
  2. --Domlith 16:31, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
  3. -- AckbarSigdmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 20:14, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
  4. Chack Jadson Talk 01:55, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
  5. Greyman(Paratus) 03:00, 2 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. Three things:
    • Introduction: "The effectiveness of kolto was considered miraculous" Reword this to avoid weasel wording.
    • The introduction states that kolto was more effective than bacta, yet later in the article it is stated to be less effective.
    • The article contains no mention of how kolto was utilized for highly effective medpacks in the Old Republic era.
    --Imperialles 20:07, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
    • Took care of one and two, I think. I'll keep searching on point three. I've seen it somewhere, but can't seem to find the source. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) NR Seal 20:27, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
      • Kolto is mentioned in KOTOR I as the basis of all medpacs of that era, I believe. --Imperialles 20:43, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
        • I took care of at least addressing point 3 with what I've found out so far. I'll keep searching KOtOR, but I've had to replay the game to get to Manaan. I am also trying all the conversations leading up to it as well. If anyone else would like to help, it would be appreciated. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) NR Seal 17:47, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
  2. Just one thing—the last paragraph of "Usage" is lacking a reference tag for most of its information. Greyman(Paratus) 19:58, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
    • I think this should clear it up. Two of the sentences should have been linked; they are now. I hope it doesn't fall under OR, but these sentences are derived from statements in KOTOR and KOTOR-II about the effectiveness of medpacs, not necessarily the kolto in them. If it falls under OR, I'll try to clarify it or remove the sentences. If anyone can check Darth Bane: Path of Destruction that would be helpful. Master Aban Fiolli (Alpheridies University ComNet) NR Seal 00:53, 28 September 2007 (UTC)

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