Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Koho

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Koho

• Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 01:01, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First ever article I edited, thought I should nominate it
• Date Archived: 00:38, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 561 words (77 introduction, 431 body, 53 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 507 words (74 introduction, 390 body, 43 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

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Support

1. Panther436 (talk) 05:04, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 05:36, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 05:53, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
4. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 02:23, 11 May 2024 (UTC)

Object

Panther

• Infobox death parameter should have its references merged into one per modern precedent
  • What does that look like for this case? Wok142 (talk) 05:07, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
    • You can add the location of the death into the date ref so you can just have one ref at the end of the field. A simple and recent example can be found on Odabba. It also looks like you can include what ship Koho was on at the time like Odabba does Panther436 (talk) 17:51, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
      • Thanks! I think I did it right. Wok142 (talk) 19:17, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
• The phrase after the comma in the first bio sentence is a little awkward; sort of reads as if Kamino was a clone of Jango. Recommend tacking it on to the beginning of the second sentence or rewording otherwise
• The word "soon" is used the same way in each of the first three sentences of the second bio paragraph. Would like to see some variation
• Worth clarifying in the Bts that the episode guide released the same day as the episode
  • Addressed everything above this. Wok142 (talk) 05:07, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
• I'm not seeing where "Cargo of Doom" calls Koho male. Am I missing something? It's also infobox exclusive if confirmed
  • It's not confirmed, I think this was just leftover from years ago and I missed it. Removed. Wok142 (talk) 05:07, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
• Missing relevant pronoun category Panther436 (talk) 03:13, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
  • As in individuals without specified pronouns? Wok142 (talk) 05:07, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
    • Found it. Added. Wok142 (talk) 05:52, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
• Would like to see the battle's date added to the intro
• The clone trooper databank in the sources doesn't seem necessary cause it doesn't mention or include Koho Panther436 (talk) 00:48, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Done and done. Wok142 (talk) 00:55, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
• Timelines gives a date for the events of "Cargo of Doom" so you don't need the logic currently there about Galactic Atlas and being between the other two episodes for the date note. You can also use the same ref for both the death field and for the date in the body Panther436 (talk) 23:58, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Amended, thanks for all your work on this. Wok142 (talk) 01:35, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
    • Of course! Nice job with the objections Panther436 (talk) 05:04, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

SorcerSupreme21

• Birth date should be mentioned in prose. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 17:59, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
  • I'm assuming you mean death date. Added. Wok142 (talk) 19:17, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
    • Aye, yeah. Would putting Koho's birth date be an assumption, then? SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 18:09, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
      • Yes. Wok142 (talk) 18:53, 8 May 2024 (UTC)

spookly

• We have quite a lot of CW era clone SA precedent for skin color addition (Vaughn, Sister, Faie) and many more. This does apply even when helmets never get taken off too. So, yeah prolly has to be added here since theres not an extenuating differing factor for this one that would warrant the omission.—spookywilloww^talk 05:18, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Understood, added. Wok142 (talk) 05:34, 10 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 00:38, 12 May 2024 (UTC)