Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Keshian spice roll

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Keshian spice roll

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:41, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: The next two articles I was planning to GAN went over 1,000 so here's this :P
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:GE

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Support

1. My copy edit Dentface (talk) 02:33, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
   • Note that I have removed your additon of the comma since that's not Tuggs's only cookbook. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:12, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
2. DarthRuiz30 (talk) 01:50, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:31, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 11:57, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
5. Tommy-Macaroni 12:34, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Ruiz

• Per comments made in the Discord WP:GE channel, we can place the publication of the in-universe book in 34 ABY. This is because the book mentions that the FO is currently looking for the hidden Resistance base (which we can place in 34 BBY). A date ref would be required.--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 08:01, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:14, 6 August 2021 (UTC)

Ayrehead02

• You only describe it as sweet in the intro. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:16, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
• Description is infobox exclusive. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:16, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
• The fact that they're baked should also be included in description. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:16, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
• There's probably room for an image of Tuggs in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:16, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• I actually think you could mention in the intro that the tasty spice rolls were originally created on Takodana.
  • The source does not establish that they were originally created on Takodana, but I've given it a mention in the intro.
    • Just to clarify, were Keshian spice rolls a thing before Ely's experiment (ie Ely only improved the recipe) or were spice rolls a thing and Ely's experiment gave rise to the Keshian variant? Or does the source not specify? 1358 ^(Talk) 20:37, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
• "At some point during their careers in[1] Maz Kanata's castle on the planet Takodana,[3] chef Strono Tuggs was stirring some basic batter" The second clause here has only one subject (chef Strono) but you're using "their careers" in the first clause. 1358 ^(Talk) 08:50, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Oops, fixed. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:49, 22 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 12:34, 23 August 2021 (UTC)