Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kendall

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Kendall

• Nominated by: 501st dogma^(talk) 15:58, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A 966 word nom to solve the no-Dogma-noms-on-the-GAN-page problem.

(1 ACs/1 Users/2 Total)

Support

1. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:52, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:46, August 20, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa

• Question: The article cites the Hapan Battle Dragon's length to HAP1-2. Do both of these pages really need to be sourced? If the information is only on HAP1, for example, you don't need to reference HAP2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:59, August 18, 2015 (UTC)
  • HAP 2 is the only one with the length info, so I've changed the reference to reflect that.
• You also totally messed up your subsection formatting. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:06, August 18, 2015 (UTC)
  • Yep, looks like I added an extra 2 equal signs to the History subsectioning for some reason. Fixed. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:41, August 18, 2015 (UTC)
• Who made this plan? "...a plan was made to move the Killiks..."
  • There. Also, upon looking for for who thought of the plan, I managed to find a quote for the description section, and a bit of the Description section and the last paragraph of Killik troubles has been tweaked.
• Ok, is it "Kendall" or "the Kendall"? I see it used both ways in quotes. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:53, August 18, 2015 (UTC)
  • Joiner King has it as Kendall, while Tempest has it as the Kendall. Since Joiner is the first source to name Kendall (and Aleson Gray's TCSWE entry doesn't help much by only referring to the ship once as "the Battle Dragon Kendall", I'm going with no the, though I'd be fine with switching stances if you believe Tempest should take precedent since it's the latest source to be released. 501st dogma^(talk) 01:35, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
    • Yeah, since it's the most recent source and latest chronologically, I think you should follow suit with its formatting. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:39, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
      • There we are. 501st dogma^(talk) 01:45, August 19, 2015 (UTC)

Cav

• A little explanation for the Solo's initial support of the Heritage Fleet might be needed; I know they supported Corellia early in the civil war, but the article doesn't explain that. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 22:24, August 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • Added, but that takes it to 1024 words by my count. I'll move it the FAN page if someone archives it. 501st dogma^(talk) 14:03, September 1, 2015 (UTC)
    • 1,020 words by my count after a few wording revisions. Removing nomination now. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:01, September 2, 2015 (UTC)

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