Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Kayo Organa

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Kayo Organa

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:33, 14 September 2022 (UTC)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Dropbearemma ^(she/her) 03:34, 14 September 2022 (UTC)
2. Samonic ^(Talk) 14:17, 14 September 2022 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:50, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 22:38, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
5. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:31, 16 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead

• I'd include that Celly was sister of Breha when you first mention her. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:54, 18 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Added.
• Is it stated that they came to visit from offworld in the episode? The intro makes it sound like they did whereas the body leaves it vague.Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:54, 18 September 2022 (UTC)
  • It's implied at most and even then not definitive, tweaked the intro. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:28, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
    • The intro still says they travelled to Alderaan. I'd change it to say they travelled to visit the family, who lived on Alderaan. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:14, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
      • Oop, yeah, added. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:06, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
• Listening to the audio again I noticed that Leia actually says the Niano is frightened of Kayo specifically, which is worth including. Also had to include Bail's line in the first quote to make the audio work as they overlap, hope that's ok! Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:48, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Added, and yeah that works. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:04, 21 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:32, 16 December 2022 (UTC)